## [[Why I created my alignment philosophy]]
### Personal
Try to back up claims when possible
- _Instead of just organizing our knowledge_ turns to a story
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### Relatability
"you are likely experiencing these two obstacles as well."
### Shorten and Simplify
Overall the best advice I can give for you is twofold:
1. Shorten. Shorten. Shorten. This could be half as long.
2. Don't bring too many ideas in at once. There is a lot of ideas in this text. The more ideas you add the more foggy the overall piece becomes. Ask, what is your shiny dime?